Drafting and planning

Here is my step by step response to part of my trailer draft feedback in class.

For the antagonist's line 'you had it coming, your family' i found different telephone sounds on freesound to make the dialogue more sinister.

One is a long monotonous telephone line and the other, the sound of a telephone being put down

Then, using audacity, i took the line of dialogue and edited in the ending sound of the phone being put down and then two telephone lines edited a part for the ringing sound at the beginning